Query Critique of Virtuoso by Cherie Reich

Cherie Reich won the Crusaders’ first challenge and a critique of her query letter from me. Feel free to add to my critique, agree with it, or disagree. Reading is subjective and, to a certain extent, so is editing. Here is her original query and below it, the edited version.

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CherieReich Virtuoso Query

Here is the edited version:

Cherie Reich – Query Crit 1 of Virtuoso

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